How to re-edit a ribbonfarm style essay for normies
1. Get rid of 80% of concepts that only do 20% of work
2. Unwind the 4 intertwined subplots and eliminate 3
3. Triple the number of examples
4. Invent a conclusion
5. Prune bunnytrails that don’t merge back into conclusion
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This is not a joke. This is literally what I do when I edit my drafts for other outlets. Does lead to 10x more readable work.
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I demand 80% more concepts back! This is why I hire you all.
(the extra intertwingled bunnyplots too, plz)
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What is the difference between 2 and 5?
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I think inventing conclusions might be counter to some of your thinking
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With the exception of #4, this is simply better writing.
Even the most sophisticated audience benefits from clear writing, prioritized concepts, minimalism.
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