uhhhhh gotta love writing 500 words and then realising none of it makes sense with your lore
Yeah. It's a fantasy with some suspense and mystery which is tied into the lore, what people know and don't know, but otherwise focussing on relationships.
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Trying to judge the best journey for the reader: 1. initial understanding, then delayed developed understanding (skip for now, return later) 2. confusion, more confusion, then delayed understanding (keep it, contradict later) 3. instant understanding (use caveat to explain lore)
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based on the way you're describing them, i kind of like option 1, but you may decide one of the other two is better for the reader. sorry to not be a more useful sounding board - it sounds like a really interesting story, though!
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