Black teen yelled at truck waving Confederate flag. He ended up at the hospital, police sayhttps://www.sacbee.com/news/nation-world/national/article217063630.html …
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This is a worse headline.
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"The ratio on our first draft wasn't bad enough, so we rewrote it to suck more."
#editing
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How about "Teenager Hospitalized by Confederate Sympathizers at Willamette Country Music Festival" which is exactly what happened.
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Or...Confederate Sympathizers Sought in Race-Based Assault. (BTW as someone who lives near this festival I have 0% surprise this happened)
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This headline isn't reporting the news. This headline is supporting an agenda.
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Terrible headline. Why did he to make a “trip to the hospital”? Bad clams? Appendicitis? Sinus infection?
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Update again! Young black man was beaten by racist, that's the main point.
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You just erased 99% of the meaning from the story with this headline.
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And again "ended up" and not "was beaten up and had to go to the hospital"
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Still a painfully inadequate headline. He was physically attacked.
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How about, for one 18-year old, it ended with being attacked by a dangerous white nationalist who beat him half to death and sent him to the hospital? Who are you protecting with these weak headlines? Do better Bee.
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Congrats on topping yourself with an even worse headline that erases the entire nature of this interaction!
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Wow this did not fix the problem. Don’t you have professionals there?
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No. Try again. Try better. Write headlines, don't make them.
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He magically ended up in the hospital? Or was he beaten by a white supremacist?
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Updated........
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This is actually worse than before
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update it again you racists
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