Hello everybody here is a third DRAFT chapter of the alternate ending of Ra. This one is a little shakier but I am still taking careful notes of all of your comments https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/continuity.html … Click "Previously" to go back to the earlier two, which are also still drafts
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its certainly more satisfying to hear from more of the characters post-War. Not a fan of the virtualization but that's a personal bias. I understand that the whole point of Ra is that its impersonal but not getting to explore Virtuality is disappointing.
I need to figure out a way to make it so the preceding chapter doesn't give people the impression that we're going to go and explore the interior of Ra
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I mean that's a great concept, but it's also an entirely new book-length concept being introduced right at the end when I'm meaning to wrap things up
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I think you've accomplished that. it's more of my curiousity based on the story as a whole
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