Alright folks here are the first two DRAFT chapters of the alternate ending to Ra. Let me know what you think. Any or all of this could be final; anything could be changed if the feedback is compelling enough. Read on or don't https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/happen.html … https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/phree.html …
It was not my intention that some colours be more magical than others... will think about this.
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Not more magical, just a representation of how much magic there is. Squeezing more chi through a screen that doesn't want to blind you when the stream is brilliant enough to blind you otherwise is a good plan if you still know how much mana stuff is going on. :)
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