Alright folks here are the first two DRAFT chapters of the alternate ending to Ra. Let me know what you think. Any or all of this could be final; anything could be changed if the feedback is compelling enough. Read on or don't https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/happen.html … https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/phree.html …
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I like the pacing of these new bits quite a lot. (To be clear, I liked the original too) Grounding the ending in Nat and Laura feels better than sticking with Rachel. I'm very eager to see where the rest of this goes and wish you the best of luck!
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