Alright folks here are the first two DRAFT chapters of the alternate ending to Ra. Let me know what you think. Any or all of this could be final; anything could be changed if the feedback is compelling enough. Read on or don't https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/happen.html … https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/phree.html …
Cheers. Not sure what "table break more make sense" means or what you were getting at regarding colours...
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Colours is frequency. I'm thinking the closer to ultraviolet, the more the magic, the red is closer to infrared. However, I didn't know that's what it was until after you used the word actinic which came later, so putting it there the first time might be prettier.
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It was not my intention that some colours be more magical than others... will think about this.
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Tweets are small! I'm not certain if the table should break more or less since I don't have a good idea on the length of the table. There was about a hundred people there, so I'd expect something like out of Hogwarts, but that's just my own imagination doing shorthand.
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