Alright folks here are the first two DRAFT chapters of the alternate ending to Ra. Let me know what you think. Any or all of this could be final; anything could be changed if the feedback is compelling enough. Read on or don't https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/happen.html … https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/phree.html …
Thanks for the positive feedback, you'd be surprised how rarely people purposefully call out particular lines that they enjoyed
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For me, your whole shtick is hard sci-fi, immense trust in the reader, and awesome lines. I wouldn't be surprised if you said that all your stories start as one or three extremely cool sentences, then you make up the rest to put 'em on a gleaming pedestal.
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I have a large number of discarded cool sentences which regrettably I could not get to
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