Alright folks here are the first two DRAFT chapters of the alternate ending to Ra. Let me know what you think. Any or all of this could be final; anything could be changed if the feedback is compelling enough. Read on or don't https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/happen.html … https://qntm.org/files/ra/end2/phree.html …
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To clarify, these are the first two chapters of ~five
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Want feedback now, or after the other three are posted?
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Now. The other three aren't done and what happens in them hinges very much on what happens here.
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