Also the long-telegraphed Battle Of Five Armies between Bard and the dwarves, in which... they join forces against random irate goblins
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There are so many better solutions to the One Ring problem that the entire Council of Elrond is dedicated to papering over those plot holes
And most importantly, tell, don't show! Better if Gandalf EXPLAINS his thrilling solo adventures AFTER returning safely to his friends
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Why explain the awful consequences of Ringwraith capture BEFORE the attack, when you can do so two chapters after everybody escaped safely?
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To say nothing of the solution to every "The characters are out of food" problem being "Someone just gives them a lot of food"
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This is a baffling criticism. Literature is not graphic, it doesn't "show" anything anyway. So what are you really objecting to here ?
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@TyphonBaalAmmon Bad: "Here I am. I fought four trolls and narrowly escaped alive." Good: [account of the actual fight as it happened]
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