quarantine 'em

Slaughterhouse-Five is almost this, but establishes up front that the narrator is a minor character in the story. Here it would be a twist

If you haven't seen this device used, do you think it would work? (If you have, of course, it may be overused and hence worth ditching...)

My long search has come to an endhttps://twitter.com/RavenWorks/status/709519410130755584 …

Of course, just because something's been done doesn't mean it can't be done again, and better

Context: this Fine Structure rewrite. Was considering having Mitch "wake up" and become the perspective character at "The Story So Far"

Probably one gimmick too far, to be honest.

If you want to make a writer crazy, force them to convert a whole story from third to first person perspective. Or past to present tense

@qntm Fine structure is fine as it is. Close some of the plot holes and/or make things more obvious and i'd bet on it selling.