One of the hardest things to do when writing (and thus one of the differentiators of really good writing) is to cut stuff that's genuinely good, just not good in the thing you're writing.
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I don't mean the proverbial "darlings" you're supposed to kill — the fine sentences you're proud of and thus hang onto even though though they should go. I'm talking about stuff that's genuinely good, just not good where it is.
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It's particularly hard to learn this lesson, because you never see the instances of it. You can see clear sentences and good rhythm and perfect word choices in the works of writers you admire, but you can't see the things they cut.
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Replying to @paulg
It would be a slog to watch through, but it would be interesting to have a screen recording of a good writer writing something. The whole thing, from start to finish; starting with an empty screen and ending with the final piece. Editing included.
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Replying to @BradKilshaw @paulg
PG did this in 2012. It was awesome. The rewriting of the first sentence changed 5 times.
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