It is an extremely rare magazine article that would not be improved by cutting the first several paragraphs. My first step when reading any magazine article is finding the actual beginning.
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Can’t figure out if this tweet would be better with the second sentence as the beginning...
It probably wouldn't, because if it would, 20 people would have been delighted to score on me by rewriting it that way.
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Just a little joke. I love your content. Your essay ‘How to do what you love’ was the first passed along to me. . . What an incredible piece - such a strong and insightful practical strategy. I’ve always wanted to have the opportunity to say: Thank you.
Thanks. Twitter will use this to make your timeline better. UndoUndo
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