I need to pay someone to help me rephrase this languagehttps://twitter.com/GrahamIMac/status/1005512640301543425 …
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(I’d probably spend more time on this point, not less, but keep most of it out of the flow of that document. In particular be prepared to brief “How is this not a scam?”, “Sounds too good to be true.”, “But what if $SHIT_HAPPENS”, etc.)
Should be pointed out that the 17% is only on the amount above 50K (I presume) and could do well with some examples. Say, at 80k you’ll pay X, at 100k you’ll pay Y
No, it’s on the total amount. So if you’re making $100k it’s $17k/yr yr one, then $13k year two (because you hit the $30k cap)
Maybe change if to when? Not only more optimistic but also a little difference in implication
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