I thought the story itself was good, but it was 1) Told out of order to its VAST detriment. 2) Bloated with a bunch of completely unnecessary crap That aside, I actually thought Ellie and Abby had good arcs.
Yup. Ellie literally ends the game in the same place she started it except for one really out of the blue 'surprise' decision
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I think this is the pacing. If we didn't spend like 5 agonizing hours doing crap that does not matter as Abby, then Ellie's arc wouldn't have felt as janky. I think the idea of her trying to move on but her trauma dragging her back before she FINALLY lets go is a good one.
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Yeah but thats not a character arc. An arc is supposed to have an end point, and result in a changed character. What Ellie did was stand at a singular point, tempt to progress then turned right back and didn't change a bit. It turned her into a flat and boring character.
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