#gamedev vlog 304 Trying to figure out how to tell my story's game through audio log-first attempt feedback welcomed https://youtu.be/vLHN-L0ROjQ
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@RJaimeSmith I would change to be more command style; like "We have confirmed your position" should be shortened to "Position confirmed."
@RJaimeSmith Basically it's kind of 'wordy' for comms chatter even for an emergency situation.
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@matchristian hmmmm i can def try that, clean it up here n there, was there anything during the audio clip you didn't understand? -
@RJaimeSmith Yeah there were some muffled and slurred sections; also not sure if those were final but were they normalized?
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@matchristian haha i kinda used my old pilot lingo, the stuff i was trained to use if i ever went down.So it may be a liiiiittle lingo nerdyMerci. Twitter en tiendra compte pour améliorer votre fil. SupprimerSupprimer
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