BTW, those of you follow my blogs know that, as a writer, I tend to be a "pantser." 
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I agree with the points in the thread, but it is fair critique, even with plot points to check off, they could write the character’s motivations in better. It’s like they don’t know these people sometimes. Also catapults go on battlements, and troops go behind bottlenecks.
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