I think comparing this story to that piece leaves the reader with a pretty good example of the difference between showing and telling. Other than refusing to say the word “bottoming” — and insisting on using honorifics — I thought it was pretty good.
Strong disagree. This met its goal well. It’s a feature profile. And, I don’t think any observer could disagree with that description!
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