@chrisgeidner Not suggesting you dumb your writing (which is excellent) down, but perhaps your eds can offer context in the preface?
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Replying to @kainoa3000
@kainoa3000 Honestly thought the hed and dek helped to do that. It's not the most accessible story though, you're definitely right.2 replies 0 retweets 0 likes -
Replying to @chrisgeidner
@kainoa3000 I wanted to get the info up last night, and I do think it explains what happened if you read the full thing.1 reply 0 retweets 0 likes -
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@chrisgeidner I agree (again, love your work and talent), but those who don't get your direction from the start will abandon. Fix the lede?1 reply 0 retweets 0 likes -
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@kainoa3000 Prolly not. The story is written, it's on a side-issue, and the intended audience ~is~ the people who care about this case.1 reply 0 retweets 0 likes -
Replying to @chrisgeidner
@chrisgeidner I agree. You are right. I just felt the piece could be more accessible. But maybe that was just my take. Much respect.1 reply 0 retweets 0 likes -
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@kainoa3000 Again, I definitely agree it could have been more accessible. But, like I said, it was written at 1:30a for those who have ...1 reply 0 retweets 0 likes
@kainoa3000 ... been following the case and would want to know about these latest developments.
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