@chrisgeidner Not suggesting you dumb your writing (which is excellent) down, but perhaps your eds can offer context in the preface?
@kainoa3000 Honestly thought the hed and dek helped to do that. It's not the most accessible story though, you're definitely right.
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@chrisgeidner The lede and first 3 graphs are completely inaccessible without former knowledge of the issue you're addressing. -
@kainoa3000 I mean, I don't completely agree — but I don't totally disagree either. It's a 1:30a story for those who care about the issue. -
@chrisgeidner Really? I just appreciate that you engaged w/ me. Minor issues. And again, I truly love your work and writing. You do good.
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@kainoa3000 I wanted to get the info up last night, and I do think it explains what happened if you read the full thing. -
@chrisgeidner I agree (again, love your work and talent), but those who don't get your direction from the start will abandon. Fix the lede? -
@kainoa3000 Prolly not. The story is written, it's on a side-issue, and the intended audience ~is~ the people who care about this case. -
@chrisgeidner I agree. You are right. I just felt the piece could be more accessible. But maybe that was just my take. Much respect. -
@kainoa3000 Again, I definitely agree it could have been more accessible. But, like I said, it was written at 1:30a for those who have ... -
@kainoa3000 ... been following the case and would want to know about these latest developments.
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