Ok, here's an example of a change I did like: the library scene
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I laughed out loud when the Beast rolled his eyes at Belle's favorite Shakespeare play being Romeo and Juliet
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But like
@JennyENicholson pointed out it's kind of jerkish for Beast to "give" Belle a library in a castle he's trapped her inside1 reply 0 retweets 12 likes -
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But this version, where Beast randomly mentions the library and doesn't realize how big a deal it is to Belle at first
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To have him openly react with surprise that Belle is awed by something he's always just kind of taken for granted
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(And yes yes it has the subtext of Belle also falling in love with aspects of the Beast's personality he takes for granted in himself)
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And that moment of "Well then it's yours" doesn't come off as a manipulative gesture
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It's a moment of discovery for the Beast - "Huh, I actually have something valuable to give"
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Part of my irritation is there is cool stuff that could be added that they kind of started to add but then ran out of room for
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The magic atlas, man, so much potential for that to add to Beast metaphorically being a depressed shut-in
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He can see anything in the world he wants, he just can't participate
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