…Version 0.1 -> 0.2 diff(erences): http://source.indiephone.eu/aral/indie-technology-manifesto/compare/v0.32.0...v0.33.0 … Feedback: aral@aralbalkan.com
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@aral the value proposition (first sentence) is awful. I had to read it a few times to understand it. Consider breaking it into 2 sentences -
@joseph_carney Good feedback, thanks, Joe. I was going back and forth between one & two sentences. -
@aral you are welcome. I would go for something that gives a clear user benefit rather than describe or explain (do that further down) -
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@aral yeah, much better than the earlier version
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@joseph_carney Cool — I’ve rewritten it maybe three dozen times now :) Appreciate the feedback :)
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@aral What about 'affordable'? Lots of sustainable products are too pricey for many. -
@evemassacre It’s a good eventual goal to have but if we mandate it from the start we won’t be able to compete on essential points…
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@aral The RSA video isn't mobile screen width. Fitvid.js? -
@thismanslife Sorry about that, fixed! Thanks for the heads up :)
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@aral and don't repeat words (you use own twice)Thanks. Twitter will use this to make your timeline better. UndoUndo
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