nother new pome—bit of a throwback—(i think people should eschew the whole submission process & just put shit out there for free during the apocalypse—)
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Beautiful poem. I didn’t think you’d return to rhyme though before Taylor Swift returned to country!
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This is really, really skilled writing. I like the staccato feel to it. So effective in creating the off balance and angry/anxious tone of someone who is just barely hanging on by their fingernails. Thank you for sharing it!!
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Heidi, this is the tip of the iceberg. Do have a look at this too. Alien vs. Predator might be your jam.
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phenomenal as always! rain really does smell like a vcr. so good. i don’t even know where to submit these days.
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