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some of it is intentionally stylistic (e.g. I refuse to use semicolons) the rest I catch over time when I review. if you mean passages that don't need to be there, I must have looked at every paragraph at least three or four times.
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if you're only on page 23, I can guarantee it gets either massively better, or massively worse, depending on your perspective. ...but I'm glad you like it.
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Around 60 now. Just plodding along in spurts. Loving the personal stories & social commentary. Not as hot on the superantihero parts. Yet, anyway. I'm guessing there's some autobiographical elements tucked in with the pre-suit days? The story there feels a lot tighter, somehow.
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