Post the 1st paragraph of the book you're writing in the replies below.
I'll tell you what works, what doesn't work, and how to fix it.
Let's GOOOOOOOO 
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Everything is brilliant. Up to that last sentence. Please shorten. Too many prepositions.


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You can have my prepositions when you pry them out from inside my cold dead hands.
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The Lost Battalion?
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