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"He saw a man in the street wearing a dark blue bomber jacket, black trousers and brown oxfords. An outfit remarkably similar to the one he was wearing. Curiously, the man's strong jawline, well groomed grey hair and defined cheekbones were also somewhat like his own."
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This tweet is a lot to process. Maybe a more narrative tweet would have been better.
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Or gradually and 'naturally' revealing that info to the reader over the course of the first half. Because I know I love to find out a character I was imagining was tall with a thin face, and blond hair had brown hair at the 50 page mark. Round face at 100. And was short at 200.
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Shit, well there goes my starting idea.
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I might change it up and write about a character filling out a form that asks about their appearance
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Lol, that's a great idea!
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I did that... Not til chapter 2 though

Granted he was beaten up in the hospital.
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I feel attacked.
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We all do.
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