I would turn the first paragraph into fast-reading bulleted points (HIM: HER:), then start the second: “When these damaged people marry,” Really like it otherwise. Sadly, this setup is all too common from today’s fatherless families.
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You’re exactly right.
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It's very hard for an author to capture my attention. I give most books 3 chapters and then I'm done if I'm not feeling it. You caught me in one paragraph. Very nice reading. I WILL buy this book, I look forward to reading this.
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I’m glad to hear it!
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