My 1st drafts are always weak on descriptive detail. Editing helps. “The man shot” becomes “The bald man with a scar across his left eye, whose father had never loved him even after countless years of entrepreneurial effort and financial success, fired his nickel-plated pistol.”
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Then I hire
@BrianNiemeier to edit that mess and I can practically hear his exasperated tone in the comments.3 replies 1 retweet 12 likesShow this thread -
Replying to @TheBrometheus @BrianNiemeier
Well I have to say I feel a bit for Brian...
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