My 1st drafts are always weak on descriptive detail. Editing helps. “The man shot” becomes “The bald man with a scar across his left eye, whose father had never loved him even after countless years of entrepreneurial effort and financial success, fired his nickel-plated pistol.”
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Replying to @TheBrometheus
Forcing your opponent to perceive so much observational detail that they're helpless to respond while you gun them down is an interesting super power. Reminiscent of Larry Niven's Invisble Man from 'A Gift From Earth'.
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