My 1st drafts are always weak on descriptive detail. Editing helps. “The man shot” becomes “The bald man with a scar across his left eye, whose father had never loved him even after countless years of entrepreneurial effort and financial success, fired his nickel-plated pistol.”
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That’s after @BrianNiemeier tells me I can’t inflict this on my readers.
2:11 PM - 29 Sep 2018
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