My 1st drafts are always weak on descriptive detail. Editing helps. “The man shot” becomes “The bald man with a scar across his left eye, whose father had never loved him even after countless years of entrepreneurial effort and financial success, fired his nickel-plated pistol.”
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I just want to see the details that go into the burritos. Btw, does one of them explode in his hand?
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That part was solid, I stole it from
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"Ugh. Nickel plating? QPQ or GTFO"
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