I'm not entirely happy with this, mostly because it's too long and pt 2+3 are kinda the heart of the point I'm making
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Maybe I'll edit it more later - could the logic be tightened up? could some section be excised? Idk but I want to keep moving
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Pt 2 is already written; I think I can edit it and find pictures during lunch tomorrow. Don't want to delay 2 to futz w/ 1
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All my problems are too complicated, and everything I write is too long... a little synecdoche to keep me on my toes
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"Loving the Sinner pt2", Sin - 1k wordshttps://quaslacrimas.wordpress.com/2017/01/11/loving-the-sinner-part-2-sin/ …
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I would have sworn there was some reason I didn't publish this during lunch, but I can see anything left to edit
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Oh I remember, I was trying to choose a picture to juxtapose with the last paragraph. I obsess way too much over illustrations
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Should I use illustrations at all? Do they actually make it easier/more fun to read? Or just longer to load on mobile?
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newé, pt 2a will be sort of miscellaneous ground-clearning, then pt 3 soon I hope
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It's written but length is a disaster. Oh well. Maybe... pt 3 will be 3 + 4 & 2a will be pt 5? Or maybe this ride doesn't end
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