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imo he was doing 2 things: 1. sneakily implies the reader is smart enough to pay attention to the differences in wind vs steamships—really this puzzles the reader, demands attention 2. now he has attention, engages the reader's smell to *fully visualise* the boat
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It’s understandable. I mean Hollywood doesn’t know ships or how they work or what people did on them.
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Nah he’s just gently guiding the reader to note this clever detail he thought of, without coming out and saying “I wrote it this way because I know how sailing works.”
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