Not bad, but the last two words are extraneous and detract. Give people credit (especially NY readers); show, don't tell (everything).
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Cut another round and it’s a winner.
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Jim Gaffigan still supports his pal Mario Batali’s sexual misconduct with 5 women. April 8, 2018—‘I know (Batali) has a very good soul’. “I’m a Catholic. I feel we should all work on forgiveness.” He thinks Ted Kennedy is guilty of manslaughter. And would be in prison...
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...if it happened today. I’m Catholic. I can forgive. But would not forgive a sexual predator whether friend or relative. They never stop searching for the next victim.
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My opinion re Ted Kennedy—I believe there was negligence, he had been drinking, but no intent to harm. What he and everyone else involved did afterwards was wrong no matter who he was.
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I would writ "I'm a big stupid train!!!"
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