so you intercut between those two stories. Now, here's the craftsmanship: make the conclusion tie those two together. >
Or she's his mom / sister / best friend. Maybe he even knows she's evil, but can't find the guts to turn her in, or fight her
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or that sort of thing. I had this crop up several times in writing my book, and this approach worked EVERY SINGLE TIME.
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