and TV shows tend to have an "A" story and "B" story. Better Call Saul: Saul is both fighting w brother AND starting new firm
maybe you complicate things by taking these two problems and SLAMMING THEM TOGETHER. The hero is dating the villainess.
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Or she's his mom / sister / best friend. Maybe he even knows she's evil, but can't find the guts to turn her in, or fight her
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or that sort of thing. I had this crop up several times in writing my book, and this approach worked EVERY SINGLE TIME.
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