"Mike", "A Selene". ICWYDT
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Replying to @catapult_cpu
here's my advice on how to turn a 80 page story into a 200 p story: don't stretch what you've got, add more story. Prob NOT >
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Replying to @MorlockP
at end. Story's start where they star and end where they end, so padding makes things flabby and bad. What you want >
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Replying to @MorlockP
is to look at a TV show. TV shows are very formulaic, but the formula is a good one; it's the formula for "what ppl like" !
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Replying to @MorlockP
and TV shows tend to have an "A" story and "B" story. Better Call Saul: Saul is both fighting w brother AND starting new firm
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Replying to @MorlockP
so you intercut between those two stories. Now, here's the craftsmanship: make the conclusion tie those two together. >
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Replying to @MorlockP
make it more than just the concatenation of the two; if you can make them interoperate and magnify, that's the magic.
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