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Strongly agree w the point that @GhastlyGrinch is making here.
Well drawn characters are people; they're constant (with some growth). The loving wife does not SUDDENLY betray the husband in chapter 7 because we need a court battle in chapter 8.https://twitter.com/GhastlyGrinch/status/1495396832876404740 …
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10/ re this > Too many people assume that the mush of concepts in their head is also in the reader's head, and that the ideas do not need any lead up. a lot of bad fiction is bad bc author has resonances in his head that he wants the reader to get ...but he never shares them
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11/ "What I'd do is just like ... ehh ...ehh ... huh huh ... you know what I mean?"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFfTludf0SU …
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] woman betray Bobby and become his biggest enemy ever because ... why?
Is that in keeping with her character?
No.
It's a surprise twist that "keeps things fresh".