reviewing friends' feedback re Kickstarter essay - add more biographical details to make story "real" and particular - take out biographical details to make it easier for people to picture themselves - explain that you're a coder, "one of us" - remove "startups", no one cares
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Replying to @MorlockP
Please, for the love of god, don't be like recipe sites that have to have a 3000 word longform essay about your beloved grandma and how her biscuits made you feel on That One Day, before plagiarizing the Clabber Girl recipe
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Replying to @EricRichards22
uh...in the Kickstarter essay? it's ... it's all essay. That's what it's for.
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