reviewing friends' feedback re Kickstarter essay - add more biographical details to make story "real" and particular - take out biographical details to make it easier for people to picture themselves - explain that you're a coder, "one of us" - remove "startups", no one cares
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Now I feel bad I should have given you some advice that contradicts itself
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