reviewing friends' feedback re Kickstarter essay - add more biographical details to make story "real" and particular - take out biographical details to make it easier for people to picture themselves - explain that you're a coder, "one of us" - remove "startups", no one cares
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3/ - emphasize the authentic nature of living in the country; that's what people are crying out for these days - remove the word "authentic" - it's too on-the-nose
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3/ - love your phrase "trade laterally" re city house to country house - ugh, the phrase "trade laterally" is Martian, if not robotic
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4/ This is our concern, Dude.https://twitter.com/ngvrnd/status/1270370621101391872 …
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