2/ - go all in, with more details on butchering ; show that this is a real hard-core homesteading book - take out the stuff about butchering ; turns off squeamish readers
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3/ - emphasize the authentic nature of living in the country; that's what people are crying out for these days - remove the word "authentic" - it's too on-the-nose
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*deck-screwed
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Please, for the love of god, don't be like recipe sites that have to have a 3000 word longform essay about your beloved grandma and how her biscuits made you feel on That One Day, before plagiarizing the Clabber Girl recipe
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uh...in the Kickstarter essay? it's ... it's all essay. That's what it's for.
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this is my favorite sort of feedback to give
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