109/ good quote!https://twitter.com/N8istootall/status/1253047272679419904 …
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ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs Retweeted Nate Campbell
109/ good quote!https://twitter.com/N8istootall/status/1253047272679419904 …
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110/ There are tons of details in Aristillus. I'm not a minimalist. I cut out about 2/3 of the details I wanted to have, and what I left in was probably 10x what I should have had. ...but I'll say this. What's there is MOSTLY motivated by plot or character.
111/ At three points the "camera" lingers on the catwalks, cables, and conduits overhead in the tunnels. One of these is plot relevant: an infiltration team is planting a bomb that will collapse a ceiling.
112/ One of these is character relevant and backstory: Mike Martin is riding his motorcycle somewhere, early on in the book and is paying attention to infrastructure. It explains that he's a sperg who likes machines, and it smuggles in backstory about how he founded the city.
113/ And the third time is at the crux of book 2, where Mike has been taken captive, is being brought back to Earth, and will be tried and sentenced. His gaze lingers on the details, drinking it all in, his eyes getting moist realizingthis is his last view ever of what he loves
114/ ...and even then, as he looks at the conduits and lighting panels, no words are wasted on the colors or filigree. If you pictured the lighting panels while reading it, great. If not, great. Either way, you got as much as you needed for the story to work.
ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs Retweeted MC_Enthusiast
115/ This is pretty decent. As I wrote I tried to set each scene and PoV hard in the first paragraph. I aimed to always deliver the PoV character's name and then had that character observe at least two sensory details about the scene.https://twitter.com/Laserpig_Utopia/status/1253048365752909824 …
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116/ The sky above the spaceport was as black as a freshly bored lunar tunnel before the lights were installed. Earth hung overhead, the once-bright cities...glowing dimly w low-energy bulbs and rolling brown-outs. Except California. California was dark. Mike Martin squinted
117/ chapter 2: The taupe-carpeted corridor that ran down the center of the West Wing was quiet. Senator Linda Haig looked at her watch. Almost half an hour late. Hardly surprising; that woman was never -
118/ chapter 3 Allan looked up. The next handhold was just a short reach up the wall. He stretched for it - and the suit alarm went off. Damn it. He silenced the warble tone, cleared the flashing "overheating"
119/ Each of these has a few adjectives, a few sensory images. Chapter 1 is a bit of an outlier, with more detail than the others, because I have to drop the reader in media res, explaining a moon colony, an Earth in economic decline, etc. all in 1 paragraph.
120/ Chapter 2 announces "taupe carpeted...West Wing... quiet". Tell me you didn't fill in the off-white walls, the wainscotting, the tasteful end tables with lamps, the plaster work on the ceiling. I said enough ; you pictured it.
121/ Chapter 3, mountain climbing on the moon - you've seen Apollo photos. You've seen rock climbing. You've seen bulky space suit gloves. You can supply the dust being knocked off of the stone finger holds, the chalky gray / white rocks, the dark clefts. I don't need to.
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