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Two-time Prometheus award-winning hard science fiction author. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B005JPPMS6  Learn how to homestead https://www.amazon.com/dp/B093BC3K1T 

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    1. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      98/ do we, in passing, get the mostly useless detail that the light saber is silver

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    2. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs Retweeted Light Unto A Panzer  🇮🇱 🇺🇸

      99/ yeshttps://twitter.com/YakovMerkin/status/1253044850817196033 …

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      Light Unto A Panzer  🇮🇱 🇺🇸 @YakovMerkin
      Replying to @MorlockP @JASutherlandBks
      This is part of why I prefer to err on the side of less description rather than more (and my editor usually does tell me to add some more in). Much easier to add than remove.
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    3. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      100/ (damnit @JASutherlandBks !) There are so many stories where I remember tons of details - the smell, the cracks in the walls, the color of the helmets ... and then I go back, and I re-read ... and NONE of these were in the story! The reader will fill in colors.

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    4. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      101/ Elmore Leonard has an adage "don't write the parts that people skip". Similarly: "don't write the parts that people are entirely willing to fill in on their own".

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    5. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      102/ In my novels I thought a lot about a lot of the technical details. I took out lots of description. I don't think I ever mentioned, for example, the color of the space suits. That doesn't mean that I didn't have ideas. But you, the reader, filled that in.

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    6. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      103/ maybe they were whitepic.twitter.com/vHmSwFQgXs

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    7. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      104/ maybe they were orangepic.twitter.com/QCJaojFlx3

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    8. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      105/ I mentioned it in passing in one place, where the militia raised by Red Stripe painted the red stripes black ... but that wasn't because I cared, but because I wanted an "equipping" scene showing a civilian economy preparing for / transitioning to war footing

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    9. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      106/ color mattered because MOOD and PLOT matter, not because COLOR matters on its own the somber painting over of a cheery warm color with a dark color symbolic of death is fitting for an unwanted war

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    10. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      107/ The scene was set on a soccer field. Same thing - England commandeers small pleasure boats to rescue soldiers - hotels are turned into hospitals. The colors were MOTIVATED by the demands of plot and emotional truth.

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      ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

      108/ Aside from that use of color in space suits, it doesn't matter at all to the plot if they're white or orange, and you the reader can fill in a mental image that works for you, so I tried to leave it up to you.

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        2. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs Retweeted Nate Campbell

          109/ good quote!https://twitter.com/N8istootall/status/1253047272679419904 …

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          Nate Campbell @N8istootall
          Replying to @N8istootall @MorlockP @JASutherlandBks
          Speaking of Star Wars though, here's a quote from Lucas that I think relates quite nicely to what you've been saying. pic.twitter.com/pWkZCpepoS
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        3. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          110/ There are tons of details in Aristillus. I'm not a minimalist. I cut out about 2/3 of the details I wanted to have, and what I left in was probably 10x what I should have had. ...but I'll say this. What's there is MOSTLY motivated by plot or character.

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        4. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          111/ At three points the "camera" lingers on the catwalks, cables, and conduits overhead in the tunnels. One of these is plot relevant: an infiltration team is planting a bomb that will collapse a ceiling.

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        5. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          112/ One of these is character relevant and backstory: Mike Martin is riding his motorcycle somewhere, early on in the book and is paying attention to infrastructure. It explains that he's a sperg who likes machines, and it smuggles in backstory about how he founded the city.

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        6. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          113/ And the third time is at the crux of book 2, where Mike has been taken captive, is being brought back to Earth, and will be tried and sentenced. His gaze lingers on the details, drinking it all in, his eyes getting moist realizingthis is his last view ever of what he loves

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        7. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          114/ ...and even then, as he looks at the conduits and lighting panels, no words are wasted on the colors or filigree. If you pictured the lighting panels while reading it, great. If not, great. Either way, you got as much as you needed for the story to work.

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        8. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs Retweeted MC_Enthusiast

          115/ This is pretty decent. As I wrote I tried to set each scene and PoV hard in the first paragraph. I aimed to always deliver the PoV character's name and then had that character observe at least two sensory details about the scene.https://twitter.com/Laserpig_Utopia/status/1253048365752909824 …

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          MC_Enthusiast @Laserpig_Utopia
          Replying to @MorlockP @JASutherlandBks
          Thinking about the details vs scene setting and wondering if it's accurate to say that you should set the scene with more numerous details maybe even extraneous/mood details, but only update with relevant/focus details.
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        9. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          116/ The sky above the spaceport was as black as a freshly bored lunar tunnel before the lights were installed. Earth hung overhead, the once-bright cities...glowing dimly w low-energy bulbs and rolling brown-outs. Except California. California was dark. Mike Martin squinted

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        10. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          117/ chapter 2: The taupe-carpeted corridor that ran down the center of the West Wing was quiet. Senator Linda Haig looked at her watch. Almost half an hour late. Hardly surprising; that woman was never -

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        11. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          118/ chapter 3 Allan looked up. The next handhold was just a short reach up the wall. He stretched for it - and the suit alarm went off. Damn it. He silenced the warble tone, cleared the flashing "overheating"

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        12. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          119/ Each of these has a few adjectives, a few sensory images. Chapter 1 is a bit of an outlier, with more detail than the others, because I have to drop the reader in media res, explaining a moon colony, an Earth in economic decline, etc. all in 1 paragraph.

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        13. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          120/ Chapter 2 announces "taupe carpeted...West Wing... quiet". Tell me you didn't fill in the off-white walls, the wainscotting, the tasteful end tables with lamps, the plaster work on the ceiling. I said enough ; you pictured it.

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        14. ⓘ Dogs don't have thumbs‏ @MorlockP 22 Apr 2020

          121/ Chapter 3, mountain climbing on the moon - you've seen Apollo photos. You've seen rock climbing. You've seen bulky space suit gloves. You can supply the dust being knocked off of the stone finger holds, the chalky gray / white rocks, the dark clefts. I don't need to.

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