I actively chose to use "sort of", "a bit", "kind of" in my first draft. Thought it made the dialogue sound more realistic. Read what I'd written - it was terrible. Ripped 99% of those uses out in the 2nd draft. https://twitter.com/jondelarroz/status/1077261252102021120 …
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Okay, if I reread, or if she reads, will try note them and let you know.
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