I really like how much detail went into this, its overall a well written video with extra TLC in the editing. (like the tv sequence) This is subjective but my biggest feedback is that the entire video is about 1 video game and I didn't see any of it for almost 3 minutes.
I think you could start with showing that trailer or a cutscene in the beginning to grip not only people who remember this game, but also people who've never heard of it before but now are curious why you're covering it.
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You've gone through a lot of effort here, why this game? What makes it so interesting? Before I spend 12 minutes watching this, whats the 30 second pitch to get me to stay? The content is really good! But I think a hook would help.
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I never played Red Steel but this video was interesting to watch all the way through, I like your thorough history overview and how well you describe its performance. Well done!
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