@EvelynYves Ms Yves, I realize that this will sound presumptuous, but I really just want to be helpful; would you like feedback on THE MERC?
I know nothing about how to make it conform better to what people want these days, but I might be able to help with the writing.
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Here and there, anyway, in small ways. Details, mostly. But the aggregate effect of getting every detail just right can be big.
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I've learned from Richard Walter at UCLA that description is really more like poetry than prose. Mostly allusion and metaphor.
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