I know nothing about how to make it conform better to what people want these days, but I might be able to help with the writing.
@EvelynYves Ms Yves, I realize that this will sound presumptuous, but I really just want to be helpful; would you like feedback on THE MERC?
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Here and there, anyway, in small ways. Details, mostly. But the aggregate effect of getting every detail just right can be big.
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Yes, I see. Again, forgive me if I seemed presumptuous. And I hope the things you're currently working on are going well.
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Also, again: thanks for your many fascinating and generous replies to my earlier tweets. All very much appreciated.
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I'm glad you consider it nearly perfect. Most writers never reach that point. Congratulations.
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