@JurassicRabbit Do you often take criticism on your professional works? I saw your Spelunky 2 review and I would love to offer some advise, but I don't want to come off as rude.
I wouldnt agree that the VO was rushed, but yeah I have enunciation issues for sure. It's a longstanding problem, and one that I'm still working on. What parts felt repetitive?
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After re-reading the written review, I believe I used the wrong word. It wasn't so much repetitive as it was too detailed. In my opinion there was too much that you explained rather than leaving everything to an air of mystery. This is what I meant by refined.
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I picked up a lot of this after the section titled: "Every Death Tells a Story." You explained mounts, traps, and many other things in detail whereas you could have incorporated that into the "visual language" section.
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