@JurassicRabbit Do you often take criticism on your professional works? I saw your Spelunky 2 review and I would love to offer some advise, but I don't want to come off as rude.
Constructive criticism is always welcome. It's all just about how you word it haha.
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Well okay then. For reference: I made it half-way through your review then stopped because I didn't want to get spoiled. But the long and short of it is that I think your script could be trimmed and refined and your VO work could be slowed down.
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The script felt repetitive at times. It didn't feel as concise and to the point as someone who claims to love Spelunky 1 should be. The VO work sounded rushed. You blended words instead of pausing to hammer home an emotional point.
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